Is this true?
The dislike I feel
HELLO
I will keep saying it
And saying it
Until finally
Finally, you hear
What I have to say
HELLO
When will you actually listen?
HELLO
You know
Haha
I'm started to wonder
How
And why
We were ever friends
HELLO
You don't even seem to understand me at all
HELLO
With your childish games
You confuse me
I don't think you understand
We're not kids anymore
HELLO
You know I used to look up to you
When we were younger
HELLO
You were this crazy cool individual
Friends with everyone
Didn't care what anyone thought
HELLO
And I loved that
Then we became friends
And it was good
HELLO
But now I'm not so sure
HELLO
You must have changed
But I guess so have I
HELLO
We are just so different now
We've both matured
And that's ok
Maybe one of us more than the other
HELLO
Friends do grow apart
I guess
It's a normal thing
HELLO
Do you realize now how much you meant to me?
I am having a hard time
Coming to peace
With how we really aren't friends anymore
Even when
I don't think you ever thought of us
As true friends
HELLO
Well
I guess
GOODBYE
-July 31, 2016
At first when I read this (found it in my notebook) I thought it was about a falling out I had with a friend last year, but the date is totally wrong, so I don't know. It's also kind of terrible and over dramatic, but now you can see how I've gotten better. :) If you haven't already followed me on bloglovin' and Instagram (I just hit 500 on there actually!!), it would make my day if you could! Also, I'm going to be doing a more of these types of posts in the future because I've been writing quite a bit of short story type things and poems like this!
What type of posts would you like to see more from me? Have you had any bad friend breakups? What's your biggest friend related advice? What time is it where you are right now? Are you a blogger? If so make sure to comment your blog url!
That was beautiful!!!
ReplyDeleteAhhhh thanks Buttercup! :)
DeleteThey rhythm was a little off in some places, but I really liked it! I love your style of poetry.
ReplyDeleteAwww thanks so much Evy! Yeah I'm trying to get better. :)
DeleteHey Nabila,
ReplyDeleteThis post was beautiful- I love your style of writing! I'm already into poetry but I'm finally thinking of becoming a poet. I find that this poem perfectly describes how I felt about letting go of a close friend.
The time here in California is 10:40 A.M. It's wonderful to just wake up at 8 and take a walk around the neighborhood.
And yes, I'm a blogger! My blog is A Scribbling Fury
Stay in touch?
~dialia
Awww thank you so much Dialia!! I'm happy you like it! You should so do some poetry!! I would love to read it.
DeleteYeah we should definitely stay in touch!
Wonderful poem. Your words are very pure and touching. Keep up the good posts! I look forward to seeing more.
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